✍️ Arts/Lit " a countless tears "

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Mariyah Takeuchi

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she woke up every night
to visit the cemetery
to put a flowers
into the stone tablet
and stay for a moment
because the person behind of it
was the person who sleeps
every morning.

-salvador
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just a minor constructive criticism if you don't mind,
please check your use of the indefinite article 'a' and the preposition 'of'.
Otherwise,
you have an awesome solid piece out there, keep it up!
 
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