✍️ Arts/Lit Poem #9 (my first poetry spoken)

[Jmrie_]

You never disappoint me i hope you can make another tragic poem because i like tragic poems

 

[Lightrash]

"Always rember to be part of SUCCESS, not MISTAKE."
But what if the only way to success is through mistakes? What if then? Lol

Success is achieved built from every little and big mistakes along the way.

 

[cutemedievil]

Success is achieved built from every little and big mistakes along the way.

Right? So maybe change that to "Always remember to be part of the SUCCESS, not FAILURE.". Gives a little more ring to it.

 

[Lightrash]

Right? So maybe change that to "Always remember to be part of the SUCCESS, not FAILURE.". Gives a little more ring to it.

Drive +Mistakes/Failures = Success + pancakes

 

[cutemedievil]

Drive +Mistakes/Failures = Success + pancakes

Hahaha you really want those pancakes huh?

 

[MisterSenpai]

"Always rember to be part of SUCCESS, not MISTAKE."
But what if the only way to success is through mistakes? What if then? Lol

Honestly I already think that too and im making a surprising poem for that ...
but for now it will never be a surprise now because you already figure it out this logical words behind the scene

I think I bump to the wrong person to throw a surpirse though

 

[MisterSenpai]

You never disappoint me i hope you can make another tragic poem because i like tragic poems

realy?
what a coinsidence.. were the same

 

[MisterSenpai]

Hahaha you really want those pancakes huh?

Hahaha you really want those pancakes huh?

you guys are awesome giving me light beyond to my expectations..
and yet I remember the last time I owe someonelse about giving me Ideas bbeen through.
I hope someday there will be one of my poems will never let you down and never ever be find another mistakes..

 

[cutemedievil]

Honestly I already think that too and im making a surprising poem for that ...
but for now it will never be a surprise now because you already figure it out this logical words behind the scene

I think I bump to the wrong person to throw a surpirse though

I'm not a fan of surprises lol

 

[Lightrash]

Hahaha you really want those pancakes huh?

Hehe, 'cause last time you told me there's none left in a teasingly manner

 

[madogou]

"Always rember to be part of SUCCESS, not MISTAKE."
But what if the only way to success is through mistakes? What if then? Lol

then the right phrase would be:
"learn from your mistakes until you succeed."

hey, what do i know? i'm just passing by.

 

[madogou]

good job bro! here's a lazy tip for you; try to compose your poems on M.S. word. It has a built-in grammar and word checker. i know it sounds kinda generic but it helps a lot. try not to rely on it too much though.

 

[cutemedievil]

good job bro! here's a lazy tip for you; try to compose your poems on M.S. word. It has a built-in grammar and word checker. i know it sounds kinda generic but it helps a lot. try not to rely on it too much though.

Wow! I didn't even think of this 'til now. Great tip!
And also, even PHCorner's editor has built in spell checker, not grammar though.

 

[MisterSenpai]

good job bro! here's a lazy tip for you; try to compose your poems on M.S. word. It has a built-in grammar and word checker. i know it sounds kinda generic but it helps a lot. try not to rely on it too much though.

thats a lot of help comes from you bro.
I am realy absolutely waiting always just for your opinion and comments.
I never doubt about waiting for it. and yet it brings me new hope to become more POET..

 

[cutemedievil]

Hehe, 'cause last time you told me there's none left in a teasingly manner

My teasing worked then? Lol

 

[Lightrash]

My teasing worked then? Lol

Yes it did

 

[cutemedievil]

Yes it did

Ha! You've been got! I got you! Though the pancake was a lie T^T

 

[Lightrash]

Ha! You've been got! I got you! Though the pancake was a lie T^T

bummer... atleast the teasing worked

 

[MisterSenpai]

Ha! You've been got! I got you! Though the pancake was a lie T^T

thats my next concept. about lies