✍️ Arts/Lit " Withered "

[Mariyah Takeuchi]

I'm one of them that bloomed
but not in the right place
I witness how superficial
to stay underneath
the soil of duskiness
no matter how I try
I'm one of the rest
who didn't receive
a single drop of rain
through the season
of endless suffering
as the time goes by
I'm starting to wilt
there's no dramatize
behind those petals
that are starting to fall.

I'm one of them that bloomed
and I'm the only one
who didn't sprout.

- Salvador
image|flickr

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[10reason]

looking forward for more, ang ganda

 

[capslocked]

The poem brings sadness, i just don't know why, but it is spectacular TS goodwork.

Maybe change the "didn't received" to didn't receive and didn't sprouted to didn't sprout.

 

[Mariyah Takeuchi]

The poem brings sadness, i just don't know why, but it is spectacular TS goodwork.

Maybe change the "didn't received" to didn't receive and didn't sprouted to didn't sprout.

note this thank you for reading!

 

[snailmanblue777]

nice poem boss

 

[Mariyah Takeuchi]

nice poem boss

thank you po for reading

 

[TheCatalyst]

Pwede ko bang gawing inspiration sa art ko ang poems mo sir? Checkout my IG po @lksmedrina, pwede din po bang gawin kong caption, i will give a proper credit po. Pm mo ako sir usap tayo

 

[Mariyah Takeuchi]

Pwede ko bang gawing inspiration sa art ko ang poems mo sir? Checkout my IG po @lksmedrina, pwede din po bang gawin kong caption, i will give a proper credit po. Pm mo ako sir usap tayo

nahihiya po ako po at na flattered sainyo go lang po hehe it's my pleasure for it hope you're doing fine at your work crafts.