✍️ Arts/Lit DOESN'T EVEN MIND

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I was not looking for
a perfect partner,
But I'm thinking how
perfect life would be with her,
I started courting her
over and over ;
Expecting a yes that
she would answer


But in all of a sudden feeling,
Hurtful love is existing
I'm doing everything ;
She does nothing


In all the seriousness I've shown,
Answer from here is still unknown
It badly hurts for my side;
That in her eyes she shows
she doesn't mind


She's ignoring my presence,
And the love I'm offering
It seems that see think
I'm talking nonsense ;
Well in fact, too much effort
I'm really exerting


-- Libre Lait mga Master --
ginawan ng cover ng kaibigan kong babae pakinggan nyo nlang nasa link yung file, yung record mdyo malabo kc nasa bhouse lang yan noon, way back 4th yr college pa ako..
Poem lang talaga sana to kaso naisip ko na pwde nman din gawing kanta..
Sana magustuhan nyo..
Dagdagan nyo nlang kung gusto nyo, open yan for revisions, meron din mga words and dinagdag yung ng cover nyan..

Original Composition
-Yours truly

Performed
-(BGT) (pseudonym)

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gandang gabi mga makata 😊
 
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