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Dorkus_Malorkus

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in the weeks after,
i traced my fingers along
the c racks and fractures of
my porcelain heart
and i could still
feel the imprint
where your palms
used to rest.

there are shards missing,
revealing the bleeding red
beneath, and i know
that those fragments
rest in your pocket.

of course,
you had to leave
with some sort of
piece of me
and i let you.

i'm not angry
at all
that you plucked
a part of my heart.

yet i can't help
but feel gloomy
because even though
you have it,
it won't make us
any less of strangers.

- d.m.
 
Copy paste bato?
thanks for your destructive criticism, mate (dejoke). but no, not at all (=
Ganda naman po, created lang sya? Or actual pic?
I feel your heart
I feel your pain
If you need someone to lean
You can lean on me :)
weeeh. thankies :) oh tara, let's be sad together hahaha chas. actually, wala pa si moon nyan. nilagay ko lang. pa-deep kunwari hahaha.
and luna is really lovely.
during my darkest nights,
it's the one that shine on me
along with the glittering stars (It's you, dear!)
i'm in awe of its beauty
and I love how the sunlight touches its skin
how it seemingly glow
around the murkiness of the sky <3
 
Your poetry is lonely. And yet, you (we) write to feel less alone.

That’s okay. :)

Because at the end of the day, your own mindset is what matters. You can either focus on what’s tearing you apart or on what’s keeping you together. :>

P.S
Dapat i-apply ko din sa sarili ko to. Sooonest! :):)
Btw, nice dp. emotera din ang peg. Char! :)
 
Luna,
Floating high among the stars
You fill the sky,
A howl calls to you. (Coming from the Dork of the Earth haha)
Curved and rough,
Achingly beautiful
I always gaze at you
Observing the equally stunning of each turn.
You might be bound to me,
But we can never be together
The cosmos will not permit
such iniquity
As I'm just a forlorn stargazer
staring at your
Pearly-creamy white
Alabaster crust.
You'll never be mine,
And I'll never be yours.
It's so sad, indeed.

Yet here I am,
As you shed light
through my window sill
Feeling your glow on my skin
looking up again,
Pondering
and wondering
how lovely
our story would've been,
If only the universe
was not against us.

Merida, mag-ingat kasi. Babasagin ka pala. Haha. Astig ng tula :)
hopia pa rin? huy hongondo. mas astig ka, captain *salutes* pero bakit mo naman ako itinulad sa lobo awooooo hahahaha.
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sige next time, maglalagay na ako ng karatula na “FRAGILE. PLEASE HANDLE WITH CARE” =)
 
Your poetry is lonely. And yet, you (we) write to feel less alone.

That’s okay. :)

Because at the end of the day, your own mindset is what matters. You can either focus on what’s tearing you apart or on what’s keeping you together. :>

P.S
Dapat i-apply ko din sa sarili ko to. Sooonest! :):)
Btw, nice dp. emotera din ang peg. Char! :)
it's a paradox isn't it? we write all these sadness-filled words to lessen the baggage of loneliness we feel.

btw, great quote! it's kinda like looking at the glass as either half-empty or half-full. sana ma-i apply ko din hahaha. pero mumsh what if the thing that's holding me together is what's tearing me apart? hahahuhu iyak na diba.

squeeeee thanks. your dp is way cooler :)
 
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