🔒 Closed Hi phcorner family, i needed your all feedback for my 2nd electronic music track, please

I'm not talented but I like doing this. My Phcorner family, you are all I have to make a progress. Please feel free to listen my new electronic music track and give your feedback, please.

https://phc.onl/#forbidden#/PNIaycOYqRE

Sige na po.

 

[PHC-albar]

Hi, di rin ako expert, its nice naman, pero depende sa makikinig, for me isang beses ko lang sya papakingan, you could make it a bit faster or more upbeat, or di lang siguro ako sanay sa mga indie music, mostly mga commercialize na music napapakingan which is made para uulit ulitin pakinggan para mabenta, but keep it up.

P.S.
Curious lang, sa pc mo lang sya ginawa?

 

[ZBibal]

Hi, di rin ako expert, its nice naman, pero depende sa makikinig, for me isang beses ko lang sya papakingan, you could make it a bit faster or more upbeat, or di lang siguro ako sanay sa mga indie music, mostly mga commercialize na music napapakingan which is made para uulit ulitin pakinggan para mabenta, but keep it up.

P.S.
Curious lang, sa pc mo lang sya ginawa?

Salamat sa honest feedback boss. Marami pa talaga siguro akong kakaining sako ng bigas para ma-improve man kunti skill ko nimo boss. Yes, boss. Sa PC ko lang ginawa mag produce ng music.

 

[PHC-albar]

No problem

 

[DaisukiAtom]

salamat sa pag share ts