✍️ Arts/Lit "you made this fire, through my eyes and me"

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"You made this fire, through my eyes and me"


When the first time I came, here and then
I might not noticed, it very well
My attention was busy, anywhere
That's why I didn't find you, everywhere

I thought I can, find a girl
Then would I care, and give a whirl
Spent some time, and talk a while
Give her a pan, from love of mine

It's been weird now, like I am doing
I talk to other pesons, you're ignoring
They talk to me a lot, but you were not
That's why I thought, and take a bite

It seems you are, a different one
From the past days, I've to someone
They didn't, ignore me twice
But you made it, in a million times

How rude is this world, how could it be
It doesn't seem, we're meant to be
But doesn't show, how I am weak
'Cause this firely deed, the way I feel

I want this come, into my life
Bring the word, comes from my heart
I need you now, just a couple while
To prove myself, can I make you mine

You owe me one, that is all I want
I want to say, to you all this love
I already give up, to someone like you
Because you beat me, the way who is you

Please lend an ear, to what I say
I want this odd, and go away
I feel Im numb, the way I speak
My heart like you now, the way it beat

It feels like, a firely snow
Since this been, a light and blow
The wind comes, through my skin
The whole mini hair, begin to standin'

Each I woke up, each day and night
I still convinced, the way it right
Ask these questions, What I realy like
I know the answer, you're my "miss right"

I know you can, a little spot
The way you speak, the way you chat
Its possible to be, to be with me
You make this fire, through my eyes and me

If there a chance, to convince you once
I'll promise to do, and hold your hands
To don't break the rules, to make you mad
So this firely feelings, will long at last




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Lupet mo boss :)
Husay..

salamat po LODI..
mediyo nagsasanay pa ako
dahil magulo english ko..

worth it naman pagnatapos..

másáráp sa pakiramdam parang nakaraos..


sana'y sabayan mo ako LODI..
pagkat ang nais ko lamang meron ding magbahagi
 

salamat po LODI..
mediyo nagsasanay pa ako
dahil magulo english ko..

worth it naman pagnatapos..

másáráp sa pakiramdam parang nakaraos..


sana'y sabayan mo ako LODI..
pagkat ang nais ko lamang meron ding magbahagi



..buti ka pa.. lagi yatang inspired gumawa :)


..ako, wala, pag sinipag lang.. madalas puro intro :)
 
..buti ka pa.. lagi yatang inspired gumawa :)


..ako, wala, pag sinipag lang.. madalas puro intro :)


lagi mong tandaan LODI..

lahat nang nagawa ko at ng iba rito..

laging nag uumpisa sa INTRO..


buti nga may INTRO ka..
eh yung iba? hindi man lang nila magawa
kahit alam nila na marami silang gustong maipakita :)
 
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