✍️ Arts/Lit Pacheck naman

[Kazuma-San]

Mga paps, pa-rate naman po pacritic, comments at suggestions naman po kung pano papagandahin hehe, yan lang nakayanan

 

[Futility]

KayNine nniv-illust

 

[larktreblig]

download ka ng Paintool SAI at itrace at kulayan mo yan....
mas maganda ang blending ng sai kay sa photoshop mga less than 100mb lang ang size

 

[Kazuma-San]

Wala po ako pc/laptop :3 tyaga tyaga muna po ako sa mongol at ballpen hehe lampera :'(

 

[Kazuma-San]

Wala po ako pc/laptop :3 tyaga tyaga muna po ako sa mongol at ballpen hehe lampera :'(

 

[KayNine]

KayNine nniv-illust

ay bakit ako natag dito xD anyways ayos na yung pagkagawa mo IMO pero si nniv-illust bahala dyan, di naman talaga ako nagdodrawing :v

 

[donteatmeat]

okay naman drawing mo TS. mas gaganda pa iyan kapag nakulayan.

 

[Matulis_2]

yun posture nya...seems nakasandal yun siko nya sa lamesa

 

[Kazuma-San]

yun posture nya...seems nakasandal yun siko nya sa lamesa

Hehe di po naka sandal yan haha tinago ko lang po sa likod kasi di ko alam san ipupwesto hehe

 

[Kazuma-San]

okay naman drawing mo TS. mas gaganda pa iyan kapag nakulayan.

Hehe wala po kasi ako pangkulay hehe tsaka pinagaaralan ko palang po mag kulay hahaha

 

[nnivx]

Okay naman, malinis and maganda yung ulo. Although simple ang shading maganda yung control ng line weights. Overall halos consistent rin yung proportion, keep up the good work. Strive to improve implied details and muscle shape, magiging madali rin yung cloth folding kung alam mo yung shape underneath.

eto sinubukan ko i-highlight. marahil yung iba di-accurate.. di ko kasi style to and mejo busy ako haha

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TL;DR: looks good, leaves a fine impression although with some anatomy errors and lacks refinement in small details

 

[Kazuma-San]

Okay naman, malinis and maganda yung ulo. Although simple ang shading maganda yung control ng line weights. Overall halos consistent rin yung proportion, keep up the good work. Strive to improve implied details and muscle shape, magiging madali rin yung cloth folding kung alam mo yung shape underneath.

eto sinubukan ko i-highlight. marahil yung iba di-accurate.. di ko kasi style to and mejo busy ako haha
TL;DR: looks good, leaves a fine impression although with some anatomy errors and lacks refinement in small details

Sige po magprapractice pa po ako tsaka aayusin yung mga corrections. Arigatooo~

 

[nnivx]

wc sige practice lang, nag ppractice din ako XD